10th Anniv. Numista Token Design Contest - My Proposal

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Here is my proposed design for the numista token. Every design element carries a symbolic message and you'll find my thought process and intentions below. I would look forward to any feedback you have. Can't guarantee I'd incorporate them, but there may still be room for improvement!

1) The theme of my design is “Nature & Fluidity”. It is inspired by flora and fauna, however with a modernist interpretation that is relevant to Numista. So you have geometry in the honeycomb and fluidity in the waves Every element in the design is my own artwork and not copy-pasted from the Internet. I have been very conscious to prepare a design that is aesthetic but not overly complicated when the mint has to reproduce the design on silver and copper tokens
2) The reverse has a partial honey comb with the numeral “10” enclosed in a circle and surrounded by 12 stars.
a. The partial honeycomb is illustrates the co-operation of hundreds of numista members building a platform for the benefit of the community
b. The blank spaces around the honeycomb indicate that while much has been accomplished, numista is a work in progress and there is room of development
c. The 12 stars indicate the 12 months of the year that numista is “buzzing” with activity. The circle alludes to continuity and structure.
d. The bold “10” is the centre piece of the reverse to emphasise the event being commemorative
3) The obverse has symmetrical stylised waves at the top and bottom with a circle in the middle that contains a compass surrounded by several scripts separated by small dots. There is a commemorative bilingual edge inscription along the rim separated by 2 stars
a. The compass alludes to the international character of numista that members come from all 4 corners of the world. The compass is bilingual with “ouest” and “west” written as a “W” within an “O”. It also lends well to the nautical feel of the obverse
b. “Numista” is written in 5 scripts viz. Latin, Cyrillic, Devnagari and Arabic. These scripts appear on multiple countries coinage (I have excluded Hebrew, Amharic, thai etc because they do not pass this criteria. I considered including Tamil, but thought it unnecessary). Again this is a re-emphasis of Numista’s international community
c. The stylised waves carry 2 meanings
i. They indicate the oceans on either sides of the word with the central numista circle connecting both of them; an illustration of how numista has brought people together whether its to share research or simply swap coins
ii. They also can be interpreted as waves of digital data travelling across the world and the fact that thanks to the internet, numista has been able to thrive. This second interpretation indicates the virtual nature of Numista
d. The inscription along the rim says “Celebrating a decade of learning and friendship through numismatics” in French and English. I personally think this encapsulates well the benefits of numista...helping people swap, form relationships, learn about other cultures, share knowledge and research and better their numismatic understanding and collection
4) You may recognise the honeycomb from the Croatian 25Kuna coin, the stars from the euro coins, and the stylised waves from the Rs5 coin of India. The beads along the rim of the obverse and reverse are inspired by Canadian coins.
5) Everything you see in black and grey would be frosted


Very pretty and inspiring, it's very creative to have so much symbology and meaning but yet look very simple, smooth and elegant.. :love:
I was going to tell you to submit it in accordance with the directions, but the original solicitation appears to have been removed. Anyone know why?
Цитата: "Steve27"​I was going to tell you to submit it in accordance with the directions, but the original solicitation appears to have been removed. Anyone know why?
​The only remaining sollicitation is:
Be creative and express your vision of Numista for the 10th anniversary of Numista
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Цитата: "Steve27"​I was going to tell you to submit it in accordance with the directions, but the original solicitation appears to have been removed. Anyone know why?
​I have indeed submitted it to Jarcek. However, I noticed on the French section there are a couple designs already floating around. So felt I got to get mine out there for visibility too lol . Also, I'm looking for feedback and want to make sure people can see the symbolism in my design. thankfully I still have time to make changes if needed till late Jan !
Цитата: "darcyrmt"​Very pretty and inspiring, it's very creative to have so much symbology and meaning but yet look very simple, smooth and elegant.. :love:
​thanks ! Help your fellow Canadian win this thing lol !! Look at me , a shameless appeal haha
I have seen the message already. <:D Nice, thanks!
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Wow, a lot of thought went into your design and it looks good!
Цитата: "Jarcek"​I have seen the message already. <:D Nice, thanks!

I'll send you an update later in the week... I'm seeking feedback right now on the English and French section !
Цитата: "@josephjk"​Wow, a lot of thought went into your design and it looks good!
​thx !! You know me... in it to win it lol
That design is fantastic!
The French section has suggested that the rim inscription may be too much to reproduce on the token... I've edited the obverse a bit to reflect the change

another issue concerns the transliteration into Chinese. Apparently the Chinese may prefer to simply change the name so that it signifies something ... eg Carrefour was changed into the equivalent Chinese of "house of happiness"

anyone has ideas on how to taken the Chinese script ? I'd like to make it work !
now to explore Baltimore for a couple hours while my nephews are in the children's museum

I rather like it, I think it communicates several artistic themes nicely.

My own feeling is that I would like the reverse better if the honeycomb was a bit more symmetrical, but that is really just my own artistic tastes.
Made a correction in the french part

Цитата: "Jesse11"​I rather like it, I think it communicates several artistic themes nicely.

​My own feeling is that I would like the reverse better if the honeycomb was a bit more symmetrical, but that is really just my own artistic tastes.
​Thank!

Its a deliberate thing...the waves (which should be free flowing and probably chaotic) are symmetrialc but the geometric Honeycomb isn't. I guess on a subconscious level I'm trying to convey the ambiguous nature of numismatics!
https://en.numista.com/catalogue/pieces53407.html

https://en.numista.com/catalogue/pieces39957.html

I guess that saying: Whatever you do, there were always two chinese ahead of you.. is quite true. :D
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Цитата: "Jarcek"https://en.numista.com/catalogue/pieces53407.html

https://en.numista.com/catalogue/pieces39957.html

​I guess that saying: Whatever you do, there were always two chinese ahead of you.. is quite true. :D
​Imitation is indeed the best form of flattery; but inspiration is always welcome lol. Those are indeed the two coins I have borrowed ideas from.
Now can you find the waves... I did say India, but there are other coins too!
I like it! How do I get these tokens?
Trade only within the US.
Цитата: "Carlos55"​I like it! How do I get these tokens?
​That makes me very happy to hear! However, the final submissions are only 25th Jan and I am still in the process of modifying and finessing my design (very small changes actually).

There's a 3-member panel that will vet all designs and then present 5 short-listed designs to all numista members to Vote (not sure how long the voting process will be). The design with the most votes will be minted and sold in copper & silver versions to members who place an order

So please do vote for my design in Feb if you want to eventually buy it!!! :8D
Цитата: "MonaSeaclaid"​That design is fantastic!
​Thanks so much! If you have any constructive critique, I'm always open to suggestions ! The final submissions are 25th Jan, so there is still time
A quick update of my design. I got feedback that the text would not be legible. Accordingly, i've shortened the legend by dropping "A decade of" and increasing the size. I figure with the 2007-2017 and "10" on reverse, people will know its commemorating a decade of Numista

The beads along the rim have also been enlarged and the N-S-E-O/W has been made a little bigger.

Let me know your thoughts. I think I'm 95% where I need to be. Any final feedback will be much appreciated!

After looking at my twoonie and thinking the token will only be marginally larger, I've made an alternate obverse that significantly reduces the text, but also gets rid of some of the design elements that i like.

But here's an alternate simpler option..when it comes to striking it, i imagine this would look a lot cleaner on a 30mm token... what do you think ?

Maybe a combination of the two obverses:
The text on the new obverse is much better (there is too little space between the words on the other obverse, it looks like one long word).
The centre on the original obverse is much better. The original obverse is fantastic, certainly when you enlarge the picture. But you have a point. How will it look on a 30 mm token. Hard to say.
Цитата: "Essor Prof"​Maybe a combination of the two obverses:
​The text on the new obverse is much better (there is too little space between the words on the other obverse, it looks like one long word).
​The centre on the original obverse is much better. The original obverse is fantastic, certainly when you enlarge the picture. But you have a point. How will it look on a 30 mm token. Hard to say.
​Thanks EssorProf for the feedback. I'm heading back to the drawing board and will find a way to get my compass back. I've already got ideas for some significant changes to my initial proposal which I think many would like and will ensure a clear coin strike!
Lovely Design! Love it!!
“A man without a hobby is only half alive.”
Franklin Delano Roosevelt
I appreciate people's feedback and i've done some fairly significant changes to my design.

I wanted to bring back the compass to emphasise that numista members are truly global. I used the opportunity to look for some more inspiration. I thought about the sun face on argentinian and uruguayan (?) coins and melded that with geometric shapes inspired by ancient latin american civilizations.

Now that I have been inspired by Indian, canadian, croation and argentinian coins, I had a relook at the honey comb. One member mentioned his preference for symmetry while another on the french forum liked the concept of different regional influences; but that it was pity not all the continents could be reflected...
So I've adopted a geometric star outline to contain the honey comb inspired by Moroccan and libyan design patterns. Islamic geometric art is absolutely beautiful and in this context, I felt it was totally relevant. Besides, you have the sun on one side and a star on the other! The blank spaces not covered by the star still indicate the potential for Numista but at the same time, shows how it has grown in all directions!

Finally and probably the most problematic was the legend. As you can see, I have completely dropped it. I believe the symbolism of the other design elements convey the ideals of Numista. Besides, a very good collector & friend mentioned that "words are silver, but silence is golden" or something to that effect (8

Do let me know what you think

I like the last design the best, the only thing I see that might be a problem is that the honeycomb design on the reverse interrupts the dots on the left side.
Цитата: "nthn"​I like the last design the best, the only thing I see that might be a problem is that the honeycomb design on the reverse interrupts the dots on the left side.
​thanks ! I'll adjust the star so that it's not clashing with the beads on the left side
Thanks to everyone who gave me their feedback! This is the final iteration of my design proposal and I'm personally very happy with the final outcome.




Just to reiterate my thought process and the symbolism behind the design elements of this design

- In general, I have kept the design aesthetics simple bearing in mind issues related to minting the token.
- this is all my own artwork using PowerPoint
- I've similarly avoided any text apart from "NUMISTA" as I felt the design elements explained below capture well the ideals of Numista.
- The design is overall inspired by the fluidity and geometry of Nature
- The grey regions are meant to be Frosted on the token

Obverse:
1) The waves represent the oceans that separate Numista members spread across the world while the inner circle with the sun compass and "NUMISTA" connects these two oceans i.e. Numista has brought together members from the 4 corners of the earth through a common platform.
2) The fluid waves also represent the flow of digital information emphasising the virtual nature of Numista. The waves are inspired by the India Rs5 2007-09 coin
3) The sun compass is inspired by the Argentinian and Uruguayan sun symbol. I've tried to meld geometric patterns reminiscent of Ancient Latin american civilisations
4) The beads around the rim are inspired by Canadian coinage.

Reverse
1) The honey comb element represents the hundreds of Numista members working together to build a formidable platform for the benefit of the numismatic community. The honey comb is inspired by Croatian 25 Kuna coins
2)The blank spaces around the rim represent that while Numista has accomplished a lot, there is still scope for improvement, development and evolution
3) The numeral 10 re-emphasises the decade of Numista surrounded by 12 stars illustrating the 12 months of the year that the website is "buzzing" with activity. The stars are inspired by euro coins.

Thanks again for bearing with me. I realise it may have been annoying to see a flurry of posts on this one topic. It has been a delightful experience to collaborate and hopefully, design the official token to commemorate the 10th Anniversary of Numista!
A good promotion.B)
Цитата: "Cyrillius"​A good promotion.B)
​I try my best :D

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